Ruby of Egypt – Blurb Market Research

Ruby of Egypt Blurb Market Research

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Hello lovely readers!

I’m after your feedback please.

As some of you know, I’m in the process of redesigning and revamping my children’s book – Ruby of Egypt.

Throughout the whole writing process the hardest part I’ve found to do is the blurb!

If you wouldn’t mind reading the below examples and then clicking on the link to vote.

Please choose the one that captivates you – that really draws you in and makes you want to read the book.

 

Version 1:

Things aren’t always what they seem.

Ruby is about to go on an incredible adventure that she and the people of Ancient Egypt will never forget.

Ruby has never been inside a pyramid. Whilst on a trip to Egypt with her parents, the inquisitive teenager follows a mysterious black cat into the Great Pyramid of Giza.

Upon entering, she is instantly transported back in time to the exciting world of Ancient Egypt. Incredibly, Ruby not only discovers that the black cat can talk, but that his name is Sadiki and he has an extremely important mission for her

An important mission that will not only challenge Ruby to save Ancient Egypt, but one that will change the purpose of her life forever.

Version 2:

Things aren’t always what they seem.

Ruby has never been inside a pyramid. Whilst on a trip to Egypt with her parents, the inquisitive teenager follows a mysterious black cat into the Great Pyramid of Giza.

Upon entering, she is instantly transported back in time to the exciting world of Ancient Egypt. Ruby not only discovers that the black cat can talk, but that he has an extremely important mission for her; to save Ancient Egypt.

Ruby is about to go on an incredible adventure that she and the people of Ancient Egypt will never forget.

Version 3:

Whilst Ruby is on a trip to Egypt with her parents, the inquisitive teenager follows a mysterious black cat into the Great Pyramid of Giza.

Upon entering, she is instantly transported back in time to the exciting world of Ancient Egypt. Incredibly, Ruby not only discovers that the black cat can talk, but that his name is Sadiki and he has an extremely important mission for her.

An important mission that will not only challenge Ruby to save Ancient Egypt, but one that will change the purpose of her life forever,

Ruby is about to go on an incredible adventure that she and the people of Ancient Egypt will never forget.

Click here to vote.

Thanks for your help.

Love Missuswolf xxx

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